LIII (Void, Of Course)
Whoever said pain is temporarywas never on the receiving endof a love transmitted virusof deceitNor lost their faith in humanityfrom the stream of liesthat some people call breathing in breathing...
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A sharp lesson, stinging with the nettles of betrayal. A well wrought write of pain. Blind fatigue debased intrigue/Love was traded in for pain/A path I followed with blind eyes/Running all this way...
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Yes! Our pain and trials truly chisel out our character in life! depending upon our morals and will... Awesome! Once again you stimulate the mind well!!Drew"We are all only flowers,watered by our very...
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Love the way this gets its reader thinking!Outstanding writing, Erik! Congrats ~ Bruce
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This piece does give a strong impression. I would love to hear this read outloud, it just screams to be heard by human ears. Great piece!
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I loved it cos for me.. i could easily replace the deception of lover.. by that of a friends betrayal... another good piece Erik!!
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TlainyaI had thought that I had left these type pieces behindfor the more dense approachthat includes layering texturesupon the reader....sighI was wrongI am, howeverglad that you liked this onethank...
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Thank you DrewI am very touched that you seem to be enjoyingthe offerings I have leftIt is very kind of youthanksERikI hereby amendWhatever I've ever saidWith this sigh~Ani DiFranco 2004
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Brucethank you sirfor your kind awardI am most happy that you felt this one worthy of one.Again my thanksERikI hereby amendWhatever I've ever saidWith this sigh~Ani DiFranco 2004
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Ah Gabriellait is nice to see youI thank you for your kind wordsand for taking the time to readERikI hereby amendWhatever I've ever saidWith this sigh~Ani DiFranco 2004
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Widesixhave not as of yetread this outloud yetstill just reading silentlybut I think you are rightIt may just sound good as a spoken work piece tooI thank you for your timeand wordsERikI hereby...
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RBof course there is that angle tooand if it is the one that makes it feel more releventthen who am I to argueI thank you for your timeand your wordsERikI hereby amendWhatever I've ever saidWith this...
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A painful lesson indeed. Perhaps it is that the pain does not diminish but that we grow accustomed to living with it.
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Oh yes we do get used to the painthe thresholdour tolerance they both build However sometimes that weakens the resolve making the small pains just as harsh(if that makes any damn sense)But yes, I...
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